Name: Deth

Gender: male

Age: 25

Race: Subrosian

Class: night time messenger

Looks: small he is about the size of a 5 year old(short for Subrosians) he is very skinny he would be considered light for a 5 year old hylian he also wears a black cloak that blends with the shadows.The cloak is in perfect condition because he can fix it whenever he needs to. .He also always carries a strong wooden staff with a knapsack that has everything he needs in it because of the way he dresses his eyes look white.

picture:(black)
(stoney.)

Clothes: wears a black cloak during the night and a mix camo brick colored one (is a mix of the colors of cement bricks)

Personality: Deth only talks to those he know will give him a job or he has to. He is shy usaly but he overcomes that when he has a job to do. Deth will do anything for a new sewing kit to make new cloaks. Deth doesn't like others becuse of how he was trained. Around those Deth knows though he still will not talk but instead give them messages in notes. Whenever Deth is alone he sneaks his bread and jam out and has a snack. To Deth friendship is like a breeze on a hot summer day... alive and flowing and refreshing one second, dead the next like all of his childhood friends. If anyone ever talks to Deth they will notice he gets distracted easily and likes to look at small bugs. In the end Deth is just a semi shy knitter that loves him some jam and bugs, separate not together.Oh and if Deth's jam is spilled or stolen he will go crazy and take out his dagger and try and kill everything in site until he gets more jam or is restrained.

Biography: Deth was raised in a village of Subrosian ruled by a dictator,the dictator killed all who opposed him and made everyone where one of two cloaks white and black, a rebel group came to be after many years of slavery they were called The Shiro Hitsoro Reclamation Undermine Group or SHRUG for short, they tried to attack the dictator many times but the lost because of lack of formation they made the formations but their messages were read by the mailers and confiscated. so the need for secret messages arised only the elite few were chosen. they were chosen from birth, they way they were chosen was by the robes they chose at age of six months if they chose white they led normal lives if they chose black well they were tested to see if the could kill at the age of six, Deth was the only one who did not kill that was chosen he was chosen because he could dodge every time they tried to hit him.they were trained to sneak past the guards and if they failed it meant death. their training included dodging knives,climbing on ledges,learning memory magic(to make them selves unnoticed by guards),and their ears were trained so that they could hear the smallest sound. Deth delivered messages from the leaders to the low ranked rebels,he was the best messenger,he delivered the 400 letters of the attack plan by himself after the other messengers got caught.after many years a uprising came and the dictator fell the needs for messengers were not needed but the messengers had no other skills so the roam the lands in search of new jobs.Deth was lucky he found a good job in hyrule market place sending secret letters between forbidden lovers and merchants.
some of the messages he sent came from the princess her self to her forbidden lover or a group of merchants trying to raise prices on milk. Whenever someone tried to steal the messages he would pull out his dagger he knew he would never use it but others did not but one day a brave rouge challenged him but Deth refused and was knocked out by another rouge and lost a letter from two wealth merchants they demanded he give them a refund but instead he gave the amnesia.
after years of work he finally got the money to rent a room in a inn. he is always able to be found in a bar in between his jobs. recently though he has had a rough time with rouges wanting to steal the messages he is sending though Deth carries a dagger he is afraid to kill.Deth has also had a hard time finding work now.
Recently Deth has thought about moving out of the town and moving to termina for new clients. But Deth has always been afraid of the water since a child because whenever the messengers trained and failed they were half drowned but Deth is willing to overcome this fear if there is a big enough reward,Deth thinks termina might give him a fresh batch of cleints since he still only has a hand full here in hryrule.

Item storage: he has a staff with a knapsack on top for carrying food and water,he keeps about two loafs of bread a jar of jam two bottles of water and his knitting kit in it. he keeps letters and money in his cloak.

Skills:
-invisibility: can use magic to make his cloaks blend perfectly with the area.
-sewing: Deth knows how to sew perfectly so he can make anything sew-able
-pole vaulting: If Deth has a staff with him he can pole vault and bring the staff with him if needed.
-memory wipe: Deth can wipe the memory of someone up to ten minutes ago to make a escape but if the enemy is mentally trained it can backfire and temporally wipe Deth's memory.
-translator Deth has learned every language from the many letters he delivers (yes he likes to sneak a peak )

Weapon and items: Deth has a dagger in his cloak in case he is attacked but he is afraid to kill or stab anyone with it. He has a strong wooden pool that is enchanted so that it never breaks he uses it to carry his sack and whack people if they are touching his stuff.

Starting Place: hyrule market place.

is this ok or is the back story not allowed (dictator )

gone

Collin.edit: Keep to own App, please.

im sorry? i really don't get that. are you saying that i need to space everything with a : ?

over

ya thanks for the advice

could i please get someone to review this?

I wonder if you read this over, cause I noticed it even when I was skimming your app before reading it fully. It doesn't start with a capital and makes little sense as a sentence.

Either way, the rest of the app looks good. It's nice to have another subrosian.
Fix the sentences a bit and read it over as a whole and you'll get a check from me.

Name: Deth

Gender: male

Age: 25

Race: Subrosian

Class: night time messenger

Looks: He is about the size of a 5 year old(small for Subrosians). He is very skinny he would be considered light compared to a normal Subrosian. He also wears a black cloak that blends with the shadows,the cloak is in perfect condition because he can fix it whenever he needs to. He also always carries a strong wooden staff with a knapsack that has everything he needs in it because of the way he dresses his eyes look white.

picture:(black) IPB Image
(stoney.) IPB Image

Clothes: wears a black cloak during the night and a mix camo brick colored one (is a mix of the colors of cement bricks)

Personality: Deth only talks to those he know will give him a job or he has to. He is shy usaly but he overcomes that when he has a job to do. Deth will do anything for a new sewing kit to make new cloaks. Deth doesn't like others because of how he was trained. Around those Deth knows though he still will not talk but instead give them messages in notes. Whenever Deth is alone he sneaks his bread and jam out and has a snack. To Deth friendship is like a breeze on a hot summer day... alive and flowing and refreshing one second, dead the next like all of his childhood friends. If anyone ever talks to Deth they will notice he gets distracted easily and likes to look at small bugs. In the end Deth is just a semi shy knitter that loves him some jam and bugs, separate not together.Oh and if Deth's jam is spilled or stolen he will go crazy and take out his dagger and try and kill everything in site until he gets more jam or is restrained.

Biography: Deth was raised in a village of Subrosian ruled by a dictator.The dictator killed all who opposed him and made everyone wear one of two cloaks white and black, a rebel group came to be after many years of slavery they were called The Shiro Hitsoro(the towns name) Reclamation Undermine Group or SHRUG for short, they tried to attack the dictator many times but the lost because of lack of formation they made the formations but their messages were read by the mailers and confiscated. So the need for secret messages arised only the elite few were chosen. they were chosen from birth, they way they were chosen was by the robes they chose at age of six months if they chose white they led normal lives if they chose black well they were tested to see if the could kill at the age of six, Deth was the only one who did not kill that was chosen he was chosen because he could dodge every time they tried to provoke him.they were trained to sneak past the guards and if they failed it meant death. their training included dodging knives,climbing on ledges,learning memory magic(to make them selves unremembered by guards),and their ears were trained so that they could hear the smallest sound. Deth delivered messages from the leaders to the low ranked rebels,he was the best messenger,he delivered most of 400 letters of the attack plan by himself after the other messengers got caught.after many years a uprising came and the dictator fell the needs for messengers were not needed but the messengers had no other skills so the roam the lands in search of new jobs.Deth was lucky he found a good job in hyrule market place sending secret letters between forbidden lovers and merchants.
some of the messages he sent came from rich merchants kid's to their forbidden lovers or a group of merchants trying to raise prices on milk. Whenever someone tried to steal the messages he would pull out his dagger and threaten them. He knew he would never use it but others did not but one day a brave rouge challenged him but Deth refused and was knocked out by another rouge and lost a letter from two wealthy merchants they demanded he give them a refund but instead he gave the amnesia.
after years of work he finally got the money to rent a room in a inn. He is always able to be found in a bar in between his jobs. recently though he has had a rough time with rouges wanting to steal the messages he is sending though Deth carries a dagger he is afraid to kill.Deth has also had a hard time finding work recently.
Recently Deth has thought about moving out of the town and moving to termina for new clients. But Deth has always been afraid of the water since a child because whenever the messengers trained and failed they were half drowned but Deth is willing to overcome this fear if there is a big enough reward,Deth thinks termina might give him a fresh batch of cleints since he still only has a hand full here in hryrule.

Item storage: he has a staff with a knapsack on top for carrying food and water,he keeps about two loafs of bread a jar of jam two bottles of water and his knitting kit in it. he keeps letters and money in his cloak.

Skills:
-invisibility: can use magic to make his cloaks blend perfectly with the area.
-sewing: Deth knows how to sew perfectly so he can make anything sew-able
-pole vaulting: If Deth has a staff with him he can pole vault and bring the staff with him if needed.
-memory wipe: Deth can wipe the memory of someone up to ten minutes ago to make a escape but if the enemy is mentally trained it can backfire and temporally wipe Deth's memory.(when Deth loses his memory he loses all of it like he has full blown amnesia and forgot who he is, why hes there, ect.)
-translator Deth has learned every language from the many letters he delivers (yes he likes to sneak a peak wink.gif )

Weapon and items:
-dagger:Deth keeps a dagger that he got from when he finished his training in Shiro Hitsoro.
-staff: He has a strong wooden staff that is enchanted so that it never breaks he uses it to carry his sack and whack people if they are touching his stuff.
-crystal: He also has a small crystal that alows him to make a portal from whereever he is in hyrule back to his home Shiro Hitsoro in Subrosia after Deth does whatever he needs to he can reopen the portal back to exactly where he was.

Starting Place: hyrule market place.

thanks collin

ok fixed it

Spelling and grammar could use some pollishing. You'll really need to start sentences with a capital letter. And I don't really understand the description of his clothes.

I also think your skills are a bit powerful, especially memory wiping and a portal crystal is a bit much for a beginnen character.

Name: Deth

Gender: male

Age: 25

Race: Subrosian

Class: night time messenger

Looks: He is about the size of a 5 year old(small for Subrosians). He is very skinny he would be considered light compared to a normal Subrosian. He also wears a black cloak that blends with the shadows,the cloak is in perfect condition because he can fix it whenever he needs to. He also always carries a strong wooden staff with a knapsack that has everything he needs in it,because of the way he dresses his eyes look white.

Clothes: Deth's only clothing that is ever seen is the black cloak that he wears

Personality: Deth only talks to those he know will give him a job or he has to. He is shy usaly but he overcomes that when he has a job to do. Deth will do anything for a new sewing kit to make new cloaks. Deth doesn't like others because of how he was trained. Around those Deth knows though he still will not talk but instead give them messages in notes. Whenever Deth is alone he sneaks his bread and jam out and has a snack. To Deth friendship is like a breeze on a hot summer day... alive and flowing and refreshing one second, dead the next like all of his childhood friends. If anyone ever talks to Deth they will notice he gets distracted easily and likes to look at small bugs. In the end Deth is just a semi shy knitter that loves him some jam and bugs, separate not together.Oh and if Deth's jam is spilled or stolen he will go crazy and take out his dagger and try and kill everything in site until he gets more jam or is restrained.

Biography: Deth was raised in a village of Subrosian ruled by a dictator.The dictator killed all who opposed him and made everyone wear one of two cloaks white and black, a rebel group came to be after many years of slavery they were called The Shiro Hitsoro(the towns name) Reclamation Group or SHRG for short, they tried to attack the dictator many times but the lost because of lack of formation they made the formations but their messages were read by the mailers and confiscated. So the need for secret messages arised only the elite few were chosen. They were chosen from birth, they way they were chosen was by the robes they chose at age of six months if they chose white they led normal lives if they chose black well they were tested to see if they could kill after they turned six, Deth was the only one who did not kill that was chosen, he was chosen because he could dodge every time they tried to provoke him.they were trained to sneak past the guards and if they failed it meant death. their training included dodging wooden knifes,climbing on ledges,learning how to stun(to make them selves unremembered by guards),and their senses were trained so that they could hear the smallest sound. Deth delivered messages from the leaders to the low ranked rebels,he was the one of the best messengers,he delivered 100 of 400 letters of the attack plan by himself after the other messengers got caught. After many years a uprising came and the dictator fell the needs for messengers were not needed but the messengers had no other skills so the roam the lands in search of new jobs.Deth was lucky he found a good job in hyrule market place sending secret letters between forbidden lovers and merchants.
some of the messages he sent came from rich merchants kid's to their forbidden lovers or a group of merchants trying to raise prices on milk. Whenever someone tried to steal the messages he would pull out his dagger and threaten them. He knew he would never use it but others did not but one day a brave rouge challenged him but Deth refused and was knocked out by another rouge and lost a letter from two wealthy merchants they demanded he give them a refund but instead he gave the amnesia.
After years of work he finally got the money to rent a room in a inn. He is always able to be found there in between his jobs. Recently though he has had a rough time with rouges wanting to steal the messages he is sending though Deth carries a dagger he is afraid to kill.Deth has also had a hard time finding work recently.
Recently Deth has thought about moving out of the town and moving to termina for new clients. But Deth has always been afraid of the water since a child because whenever the messengers trained and failed they were half drowned but Deth is willing to overcome this fear if there is a big enough reward,Deth thinks termina might give him a fresh batch of cleints since he still only has a hand full here in hryrule.

Item storage: he has a staff with a knapsack on top for carrying food and water,he keeps about two loafs of bread a jar of jam two bottles of water and his knitting kit in it. He keeps letters and money in his cloak.

Skills:
-Near perfect senses: Since Deth was raised so that he could not be caught by gaurds at night his senses where trained to near perfection.
-sewing: Deth knows how to sew perfectly so he can make anything sew-able
-pole vaulting: If Deth has a staff with him he can pole vault and bring the staff with him if needed.
-stun:Deth can stun someone for about 3 minutes if he focuses all his energy into it. He needs to hit there head to stun them. (easer the shorter the opponent.)

Weapon and items:
-Dagger:Deth keeps a dagger that he got from when he finished his training in Shiro Hitsoro.
-Staff: He has a strong wooden staff that is enchanted so that it never breaks he uses it to carry his sack and whack people if they are touching his stuff.
-jam: Deth has a strange jam in his knapsack that even he does not know what it is made of but he loves the taste and smell of it.
-knitting set: Deth always carries around his knitting set in his knapsack so he can fix his cloak whenever he needs it or to make a new one.

Starting Place: hyrule market place.

is this better? I tried to fix all the mistakes I saw also i had asked collin if i could have the portal crystal but since you said it's over powered I took it out.

is there anying wrong with my app so noone posts?

What did we tell you about impatience?

sorry i just have nothing else to do lately so im trying to get this approved soon before i have to go back to school and be gone for half the day >.>

Well you're good character-wise. I see you even deleted the invisibility. I don't think magically making yourself hard to spot would be too overpowered if you restricted it a bit (like it would make you transperant in stead of invisible, or you couldn't move when using it, or something like that).

I still see a lot of missing spaces, missing capitals and some spelling mistakes. I'd advise you to use a text editor like word to check your spelling and grammar. You see, spelling and grammar are kind of really important, since everything you do here is in written format. Now we're not enforcing perfection or anything, but your language use at the moment is slightly below par.

Name: Deth

Gender: male

Age: 25

Race: Subrosian

Class: night time messenger

Looks: He is about the size of a 5 year old(small for Subrosians). He is very skinny he would be considered light compared to a normal Subrosian. He also wears a black cloak that blends with the shadows, the cloak is in perfect condition because he can fix it whenever he needs to. He also always carries a strong wooden staff with a knapsack that has everything he needs in it, because of the way he dresses his eyes look white.

Clothes: Deth's only clothing that is ever seen is the black cloak that he wears

Personality: Deth only talks to those he know will give him a job or he has to. He is shy usually but he overcomes that when he has a job to do. Deth will do anything for a new sewing kit to make new cloaks. Deth doesn't like others because of how he was trained. Around those Deth knows though he still will not talk but instead g ive them messages in notes. Whenever Deth is alone he sneaks his bread and jam out and has a snack. To Deth friendship is like a breeze on a hot summer day... alive and flowing and refreshing one second, dead the next like all of his childhood friends. If anyone ever talks to Deth they will notice he gets distracted easily and likes to look at small bugs. In the end Deth is just a semi shy knitter that loves him some jam and bugs, separate not together. Oh and if Deth's jam is spilled or stolen he will go crazy and take out his dagger and try and kill everything in site until he gets more jam or is restrained.

Biography: Deth was raised in a village of Subrosian ruled by a dictator. The dictator killed all who opposed him and made everyone wear one of two cloaks white and black, a rebel group came to be after many years of slavery they were called The Shiro Hitsoro(the towns name) Reclamation Group or SHRG for short, they tried to attack the dictator many times but the lost because of lack of formation they made the formations but their messages were read by the mailers and confiscated. So the need for secret messages arised only the elite few were chosen. They were chosen from birth, they way they were chosen was by the robes they chose at age of six months if they chose white they led normal lives if they chose black well they were tested to see if they could kill after they turned six, Deth was the only one who did not kill that was chosen, he was chosen because he could dodge every time they tried to provoke him. they were trained to sneak past the guards and if they failed it meant death. their training included dodging wooden knifes, climbing on ledges, learning how to stun(to make them selves unremembered by guards),and their senses were trained so that they could hear the smallest sound. Deth delivered messages from the leaders to the low ranked rebels, He was the one of the best messengers, he delivered 100 of 400 letters of the attack plan by himself after the other messengers got caught. After many years a uprising came and the dictator fell the needs for messengers were not needed but the messengers had no other skills so the roam the lands in search of new jobs. Deth was lucky he found a good job in hyrule market place sending secret letters between forbidden lovers and merchants.
some of the messages he sent came from rich merchants kid's to their forbidden lovers or a group of merchants trying to raise prices on milk. Whenever someone tried to steal the messages he would pull out his dagger and threaten them. He knew he would never use it but others did not but one day a brave rouge challenged him but Deth refused and was knocked out by another rouge and lost a letter from two wealthy merchants they demanded he give them a refund but instead he gave the amnesia.
After years of work he finally got the money to rent a room in a inn. He is always able to be found there in between his jobs. Recently though he has had a rough time with rouges wanting to steal the messages he is sending though Deth carries a dagger he is afraid to kill. Deth has also had a hard time finding work recently.
Recently Deth has thought about moving out of the town and moving to termina for new clients. But Deth has always been afraid of the water since a child because whenever the messengers trained and failed they were half drowned but Deth is willing to overcome this fear if there is a big enough reward, Deth thinks termina might give him a fresh batch of clients since he still only has a hand full here in hryrule.

Item storage: he has a staff with a knapsack on top for carrying food and water, he keeps about two loafs of bread a jar of jam two bottles of water and his knitting kit in it. He keeps letters and money in his cloak.

Skills:
-Near perfect senses: Since Deth was raised so that he could not be caught by guards at night his senses where trained to near perfection.
-Sewing: Deth knows how to sew perfectly so he can make anything sew-able
-Pole vaulting: If Deth has a staff with him he can pole vault and bring the staff with him if needed.
-Stun: Deth can stun someone for about 3 minutes if he focuses all his energy into it. He needs to hit there head to stun them. (easer the shorter the opponent.)
Shadow reflection: Deth can make every part of him turn shadow black ( shadows aren’t PURE black) he can not move while this is in place his body gets stiff it takes him about a minute until he can move again. He can be bumped into during this time. He is only visible if you are exactly in 2 inches in front of him (unless you have perfect eye sight.)

Weapon and items:
-Dagger: Deth keeps a dagger that he got from when he finished his training in Shiro Hitsoro.
-Staff: He has a strong wooden staff that is enchanted so that it never breaks he uses it to carry his sack and whack people if they are touching his stuff.
-jam: Deth has a strange jam in his knapsack that even he does not know what it is made of but he loves the taste and smell of it.
-knitting set: Deth always carries around his knitting set in his knapsack so he can fix his cloak whenever he needs it or to make a new one.

Starting Place: hyrule market place.

is this better? I tried to fix all the mistakes I saw i took me awhile to reformat it for my text checker. (Microsoft works word processor) i added shadow meld to it so that it goes with his backround and he has a weakness that makes sense. I hope I fixed everything.

Much better check 1

Name: Deth

Gender: male

Age: 25

Race: Subrosian

Class: night time messenger

Looks: He is about the size of a 5 year old(small for Subrosians). He is very skinny he would be considered light compared to a normal Subrosian. He also wears a black cloak that blends with the shadows, the cloak is in perfect condition because he can fix it whenever he needs to. He also always carries a strong wooden staff with a knapsack that has everything he needs in it, because of the way he dresses his eyes look white.

Clothes: Deth's only clothing that is ever seen is the black cloak that he wears

Personality: Deth only talks to those he know will give him a job or he has to. He is shy usually but he overcomes that when he has a job to do. Deth will do anything for a new sewing kit to make new cloaks. Deth doesn't like others because of how he was trained. Around those Deth knows though he still will not talk but instead g ive them messages in notes. Whenever Deth is alone he sneaks his bread and jam out and has a snack. To Deth friendship is like a breeze on a hot summer day... alive and flowing and refreshing one second, dead the next like all of his childhood friends. If anyone ever talks to Deth they will notice he gets distracted easily and likes to look at small bugs. In the end Deth is just a semi shy knitter that loves him some jam and bugs, separate not together. Oh and if Deth's jam is spilled or stolen he will go crazy and take out his dagger and try and kill everything in site until he gets more jam or is restrained.

Biography: Deth was raised in a village of Subrosian ruled by a dictator. The dictator killed all who opposed him and made everyone wear one of two cloaks white and black, a rebel group came to be after many years of slavery they were called The Shiro Hitsoro(the towns name) Reclamation Group or SHRG for short, they tried to attack the dictator many times but the lost because of lack of formation they made the formations but their messages were read by the mailers and confiscated. So the need for secret messages arised only the elite few were chosen. They were chosen from birth, they way they were chosen was by the robes they chose at age of six months if they chose white they led normal lives if they chose black well they were tested to see if they could kill after they turned six, Deth was the only one who did not kill that was chosen, he was chosen because he could dodge every time they tried to provoke him. they were trained to sneak past the guards and if they failed it meant death. their training included dodging wooden knifes, climbing on ledges, learning how to stun(to make them selves unremembered by guards),and their senses were trained so that they could hear the smallest sound. Deth delivered messages from the leaders to the low ranked rebels, He was the one of the best messengers, he delivered 100 of 400 letters of the attack plan by himself after the other messengers got caught. After many years a uprising came and the dictator fell the needs for messengers were not needed but the messengers had no other skills so the roam the lands in search of new jobs. Deth was lucky he found a good job in hyrule market place sending secret letters between forbidden lovers and merchants.
some of the messages he sent came from rich merchants kid's to their forbidden lovers or a group of merchants trying to raise prices on milk. Whenever someone tried to steal the messages he would pull out his dagger and threaten them. He knew he would never use it but others did not but one day a brave rouge challenged him but Deth refused and was knocked out by another rouge and lost a letter from two wealthy merchants they demanded he give them a refund but instead he gave the amnesia.
After years of work he finally got the money to rent a room in a inn. He is always able to be found there in between his jobs. Recently though he has had a rough time with rouges wanting to steal the messages he is sending though Deth carries a dagger he is afraid to kill. Deth has also had a hard time finding work recently.
Recently Deth has thought about moving out of the town and moving to termina for new clients. But Deth has always been afraid of the water since a child because whenever the messengers trained and failed they were half drowned but Deth is willing to overcome this fear if there is a big enough reward, Deth thinks termina might give him a fresh batch of clients since he still only has a hand full here in hryrule.

Item storage: he has a staff with a knapsack on top for carrying food and water, he keeps about two loafs of bread a jar of jam two bottles of water and his knitting kit in it. He keeps letters and money in his cloak.

Skills:
-Near perfect senses: Since Deth was raised so that he could not be caught by guards at night his senses where trained to near perfection.
-Sewing: Deth knows how to sew perfectly so he can make anything sew-able
-Pole vaulting: If Deth has a staff with him he can pole vault and bring the staff with him if needed.
-Stun: Deth can stun someone for about 3 minutes if he focuses all his energy into it. He needs to hit their head to stun them. (easer the shorter the opponent.) He focuses his energy through his hand it takes him about a minute or two to focus ALL his energy into it (after he does this he passes out for a undefined amount of time.) to actually transfer the energy he has to line up his energy flow with theirs and connect for the half second needed to drain them.(if they are powerful enough they can reverse it on Deth so only he gets knocked out. they would need a extensive knowledge of the body like Deth does to do so though.)
Shadow reflection: Deth can make every part of him turn shadow black ( shadows aren’t PURE black) he can not move while this is in place his body gets stiff it takes him about a minute until he can move again. He can be bumped into during this time. He is only visible if you are exactly in 2 inches in front of him (unless you have perfect eye sight.)it goes without saying that unless he is in the shadows or it is night it doesn't help him

Weapon and items:
-Dagger: Deth keeps a dagger that he got from when he finished his training in Shiro Hitsoro.
-Staff: He has a strong wooden staff that is enchanted so that it never breaks he uses it to carry his sack and whack people if they are touching his stuff.
-jam: Deth has a strange jam in his knapsack that even he does not know what it is made of but he loves the taste and smell of it. The jam seems to soothe Deth when he gets angry.
-knitting set: Deth always carries around his knitting set in his knapsack so he can fix his cloak whenever he needs it or to make a new one.

Starting Place: hyrule market place.

I changed some info on shadow reflection and stun.

hey ill be gone for about a week so within that time i annot post on here unless a get luckty so cya in a week.

Remember to read over your posts... And I mean everywhere on the board. Things are so much easier to read when using proper spelling and grammar.

Either way, yeah, I don't think I hold onto you much longer, so when you get back you'll have yourself a character to start with.

DO, however, remember to read through your posts and fix your typos/spelling.