Name: Zonic
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Race: Hylian
Class: Swordsman

Looks: Zonic has long dark blue hair that the back give the appareance of spikes. No, they're not real spikes. They just look like spikes. His eyes are emerald green and are almost always fixed in a serious frown. His skin is lightly tanned from all the time he has spent training his sword tactics in the evening sun.

Clothes: Zonic wears a black tunic with a black leather vest on top. Underneath he's got a silver chain mail shirt for defensive purposes. Zonic wears regular dark blue pants, nothing special. To top off his normal atire, he wears black boots, yes, nothing special about those either. He wears a sky blue crescent moon shaped necklace that he holds dear. The necklace seems to be what keeps him fixed on his task of finding out his purpose in Hyrule.

Personality: Zonic can be rutheless and cruel when needed to be, this side of himself he shows out to everyone that he does not know. He is tunnel visioned at times, not letting anything anyone says stand in his way of his goals. Although Zonic has his cruel and ruthless side, he also is kind, but that is rarely shown to anyone. Zonic also protects people who cannot defend themselves. He will also take down his enemy at all cost, not thinking for a moment to back down.

Biography: Zonic's past is unknown to himself, he has no memory of how he got to Hyrule, or what purpose he serves. Zonic can only faintly remember certain parts of his past. He remembers he had no family, and met a few friends along his travels from distant lands. He knows that he had his Crescent Moon Necklace since he was young, which he holds dearest. He arrived in The Temple of Time, not remembering anything except a really bright, red light, which he finds very annoying to remember in flashbacks.
He remembers that a voice told him to seek out a partner that he would aid. He believes that this is his purpose. The voice also told him that he holds great dark power within him, and it should not be used unwisely. Although Zonic pays no attention to this. Zonic knows nothing of Hyrule or the secrets that lie within, but if he can recall, he has been in many situations where he has no idea what he's doing. Zonic always seems to be alert of any danger, this is because Zonic always had a sense for justice, even though he causes unjustice occasionally. Zonic's Soul seems to be shrouded in darkness, but whoever brought him to this world wants to wipe the darkness away.

Item storage: Zonic has no need for an item storage, he uses his pockets. Revolutionary!

Skills: Zonic has the ability to manipulate darkness around him. Why he has these powers is not known to him. He is an expert at swordplay, but always seems to accidently knock out training partners when practicing.

Weapon and items: Soul, a black blade with an emblem that is in the shape of a crescent moon.

Starting Place: Temple of Time

(Curse you Adri!)

Hello, welcome to Zeldafront

To get straight to the point: Your background is a bit on the short side, I think it could use a bit more detail and description. I would also like to know whatyou mean by manipulating the darkness around you before we can let you in.

The part that really bothers me is that your character's is an alternate spelling of Sonic and that your character looks a lot like this Sega character. Of course it isn't bad to find your inspiration in other characters, but it's a bit too obvious here to be acceptable, sorry.

Name: Zon
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Race: Hylian
Class: Swordsman

Looks: Zon has long dark blue hair that the back around the neck give the appareance of spikes. No, they're not real spikes. They just look like spikes. His eyes are emerald green and are almost always fixed in a serious frown. His skin is lightly tanned from all the time he has spent training his sword tactics in the evening sun.

Clothes: Zon wears a black tunic with a black leather vest on top. Underneath he's got a silver chain mail shirt for defensive purposes. Zon wears regular dark blue pants, nothing special. To top off his normal atire, he wears black boots, yes, nothing special about those either. He wears a sky blue crescent moon shaped necklace that he holds dear. The necklace seems to be what keeps him fixed on his task of finding out his purpose in Hyrule.

Personality: Zon can be rutheless and cruel when needed to be, this side of himself he shows out to everyone that he does not know. He is tunnel visioned at times, not letting anything anyone says stand in his way of his goals. Although Zon has his cruel and ruthless side, he also is kind, but that is rarely shown to anyone. Zon also protects people who cannot defend themselves. He will also take down his enemy at all cost, not thinking for a moment to back down.

Biography: The one thing that bothers Zon is that his past is unknown to himself, he has no memory of how he got to Hyrule, or what purpose he serves. He always takes the time to think about his past, but ends up with nothing. Zon can only faintly remember certain parts of his past. He remembers he had no family, and met a few friends along his travels from distant lands. Zon is always trying to remember if what he thinks of his family is true, if he doesnt have one, or if he does that he can no longer remember. With that question always ringing in his head, he wonders if maybe one of his family members are here in Hyrule, or maybe he lived in Hyrule as well, but does not know it. Zon has had few friends, but he faintly remembers one, one he met in a distant land. He knows that he had his Crescent Moon Necklace since he was young, which he holds dearest. He arrived in The Temple of Time, not remembering anything except a really bright, red light, which he finds very annoying to remember in flashbacks.
He remembers that a voice told him to seek out a partner that he would aid. He believes that this is his purpose. The voice also told him that he holds great dark power within him, and it should not be used unwisely. Although Zon pays no attention to this. Zon knows nothing of Hyrule or the secrets that lie within, but if he can recall, he has been in many situations where he has no idea what he's doing. Zon always seems to be alert of any danger, this is because Zon always had a sense for justice, even though he causes unjustice occasionally. Zon's Soul seems to be shrouded in darkness, but whoever brought him to this world wants to wipe the darkness away.

Item storage: Zon has no need for an item storage, he uses his pockets. Revolutionary!

Skills: Zon has the ability to manipulate darkness around him, mostly from his own emotions or the emotions from others around him. With this ability, he can use the darkness to attack his opponent, he has yet to master everything his darkness can do. Why he has these powers is not known to him. He is an expert at swordplay, but always seems to accidently knock out training partners when practicing.

Weapon and items: Soul, a black blade with an emblem that is in the shape of a crescent moon.

Starting Place: Temple of Time, how he arrived at this location in unknown.

(Curse you Adri!)

Hmm. Zon is actually a common word in Dutch, but I'm sure you didn't do that on purpose and I think the word has namelike qualities, so I'll accept it

I'm sorry though, but I still have a hard time imagining what those darkness controlling powers do. How do you attack people with darkness? Does darkness wack them in the head, or eat them, or do you shoot pieces of darkness at them? It's important to be descriptive about skills to keep godmoding on a leash.

Gracias.

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Name: Zon
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Race: Hylian
Class: Swordsman

Looks: Zon has long dark blue hair that the back around the neck give the appareance of spikes. No, they're not real spikes. They just look like spikes. His eyes are emerald green and are almost always fixed in a serious frown. His skin is lightly tanned from all the time he has spent training his sword tactics in the evening sun.

Clothes: Zon wears a black tunic with a black leather vest on top. Underneath he's got a silver chain mail shirt for defensive purposes. Zon wears regular dark blue pants, nothing special. To top off his normal atire, he wears black boots, yes, nothing special about those either. He wears a sky blue crescent moon shaped necklace that he holds dear. The necklace seems to be what keeps him fixed on his task of finding out his purpose in Hyrule.

Personality: Zon can be rutheless and cruel when needed to be, this side of himself he shows out to everyone that he does not know. He is tunnel visioned at times, not letting anything anyone says stand in his way of his goals. Although Zon has his cruel and ruthless side, he also is kind, but that is rarely shown to anyone. Zon also protects people who cannot defend themselves. He will also take down his enemy at all cost, not thinking for a moment to back down.

Biography: The one thing that bothers Zon is that his past is unknown to himself, he has no memory of how he got to Hyrule, or what purpose he serves. He always takes the time to think about his past, but ends up with nothing. Zon can only faintly remember certain parts of his past. He remembers he had no family, and met a few friends along his travels from distant lands. Zon is always trying to remember if what he thinks of his family is true, if he doesnt have one, or if he does that he can no longer remember. With that question always ringing in his head, he wonders if maybe one of his family members are here in Hyrule, or maybe he lived in Hyrule as well, but does not know it. Zon has had few friends, but he faintly remembers one, one he met in a distant land. He knows that he had his Crescent Moon Necklace since he was young, which he holds dearest. He arrived in The Temple of Time, not remembering anything except a really bright, red light, which he finds very annoying to remember in flashbacks.

Although Zon can no longer remember how he came to Hyrule, or much about his past, he does remember a few things from his former home. He remembers that he had a few friends that helped him in one of his former journeys. On this journey, he was searching for a Mirror, but this mirror had the ability to alter the appearance of anyone who used the mirror. The Mirror that was stolen was returned to the village but a piece was missing from the Mirror. As he left the village to search for this missing piece, he remembers he saw a bright red light, just out of the blue. The next thing he knew, he lost his memory of his friends, family, and even what the name of his home town was.

Zon remembers that a voice told him to seek out a partner that he would aid. He believes that this is his purpose. The voice also told him that he holds great dark power within him, and it should not be used unwisely. Although Zon pays no attention to this. Zon knows nothing of Hyrule or the secrets that lie within, but if he can recall, he has been in many situations where he has no idea what he's doing. Zon always seems to be alert of any danger, this is because Zon always had a sense for justice, even though he causes unjustice occasionally. Zon's Soul seems to be shrouded in darkness, but whoever brought him to this world wants to wipe the darkness away.

Item storage: Zon has no need for an item storage, he uses his pockets. Revolutionary!

Skills: Zon has the ability to manipulate darkness around him, mostly from his own emotions or the emotions from others around him. With this ability, he can use the darkness to attack his opponent, yet he uses it rarely. Zon has yet to master everything his darkness can do. Zon's darkness is used to attack his openents with force, such as fire or other magic. It harms the body like a blow would do to it, the power varies. Zon's basic use of darkness is firing a small burst of darkness from his hand or fist, firing it at his opponent. Although Zon has his darkness, he prefers his sword, Soul. Why he has these powers is not known to him. He is an expert at swordplay, but always seems to accidently knock out training partners when practicing. This is a bad habit for him.

Weapon and items: Soul, a black blade with an emblem that is in the shape of a crescent moon. The crescent moon matches his necklace. The relation between his blade and his necklace is to anyone but himself.

Starting Place: Temple of Time, how he arrived at this location in unknown.

(Curse you Adri!)

I still think I'd draw him as Sonic would I ever have to... But since Raeden thinks I should get off my lazy ass and check apps I will.

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